
Developmental Critique
Price: $7 per 1,000 words
My developmental critique identifies big picture issues such as plotline, pacing, and emotional payoff, as well as issues that may affect your genre and audience.
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My developmental critique includes a full read-through of your manuscript, light comments inside the manuscript, and an editorial letter explaining recommendations to improve reader investment and satisfaction. After edits have been delivered, I am available to answer questions to help you analyze possible solutions and plan your next steps.​
My expertise is in fantasy, science fiction, and adventure novels. I can edit for adult, young adult, or middle grade audiences.
I do not edit nonfiction, literary fiction, picture book, or romance manuscripts.
My editing style focuses on helping authors understand the impact of their writing choices on readers so that they can make the best editing decisions for their book.